Package: wiican
Version: 0.3.1-4
Severity: minor

The description of wiican needs some significant improvements.  I've
tried rewriting it below.  You can also get review for this kind of text
from [email protected] .

Notably, "it's" expands to "it is", and you don't need to use a pronoun
like "it" if you already used a noun, only if you omit the noun.  Apart
from that, some missing or incorrect connecting words, in particular
that you can't say "for $verb", only "for ${verb}ing" or "to $verb".

> Description: Simple wiimote usage assistant and mapping manager
> 
> Wiican it's an user-friendly systray application for use and configure
> wiimote (or Wii remote controller). On backend it's wminput , the cwiid
> event driver for wiimote.

Wiican provides a user-friendly system tray application to use and
configure a Wii remote controller (or Wiimote).  It uses wminput, the
cwiid event driver for the Wiimote.

> It tracks if the needed bluetooth adapter it's available and drives
> the user into the process of connect/disconnect wiimote

Wiican guides the user through the process of connecting and
disconnecting a Wiimote.

> A mapping manager it's supplied for edit and create  multiple wiimote
> configurations.

Wiican also supplies a mapping manager to create and edit multiple
Wiimote configurations.

- Josh Triplett

-- System Information:
Debian Release: wheezy/sid
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (500, 'stable'), (1, 'experimental')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.37-trunk-amd64 (SMP w/2 CPU cores)
Locale: LANG=en_US.utf8, LC_CTYPE=en_US.utf8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash



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