Package: aptitude-gtk
Version: 0.6.3-3.2
Severity: wishlist
Tags: patch

Dear Maintainer,
translating the package description to German I found a typo in the
description of aptitude-doc-es (1.diff).

And to me "text mode" sounds better than terminal-based (2.diff).

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http://www.xibalba.demon.co.uk/jbr/linux/esl.html
Based
The word -based is often unnecessary padding.  An Ajax-based app is
the same as an Ajax app, a network-based connection is a network
connection, a Qt-based GUI is a Qt GUI, and so on.

Kind regards
      Martin

--- control.old	2011-03-25 22:53:09.000000000 +0100
+++ control.1	2011-03-25 23:08:54.000000000 +0100
@@ -50,8 +50,8 @@
  aptitude is also Y2K-compliant, non-fattening, naturally cleansing,
  and housebroken.
  .
- This package contains an EXPERIMENTAL version of aptitude that
- includes a GTK+-based graphical interface.  It is INCOMPLETE and may
+ This package contains an EXPERIMENTAL version of aptitude and a GTK+
+ graphical interface.  It is INCOMPLETE and may
  not work properly.  If you do not need a GUI or prefer a more stable
  interface, you can instead use the version of aptitude found in the
  package "aptitude".
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@
 Suggests: aptitude
 Description: Spanish manual for aptitude, a terminal-based package manager
  aptitude is a terminal-based package manager.  This package contains
- the English version of the aptitude user's manual in HTML format.
+ the Spanish version of the aptitude user's manual in HTML format.
 
 Package: aptitude-doc-fi
 Section: doc
--- control.1	2011-03-25 23:08:54.000000000 +0100
+++ control	2011-03-25 23:10:09.000000000 +0100
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 Recommends: aptitude-doc-en | aptitude-doc, sensible-utils, apt-xapian-index, libparse-debianchangelog-perl
 Suggests: tasksel, debtags
 Conflicts: ia32-apt-get (<< 22)
-Description: terminal-based package manager (terminal interface only)
+Description: text mode package manager (terminal interface only)
  aptitude is a package manager with a number of useful features,
  including: a mutt-like syntax for matching packages in a flexible
  manner, dselect-like persistence of user actions, the ability to
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
  and housebroken.
  .
  This package contains a version of aptitude compiled with only the
- classic terminal-based interface (using curses).  For an experimental
+ classic text mode interface (using curses).  For an experimental
  graphical interface, see the package aptitude-gtk.
 
 Package: aptitude-gtk
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
 Depends: aptitude (= ${binary:Version}), ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: aptitude-doc-en | aptitude-doc, sensible-utils, apt-xapian-index
 Suggests: tasksel, debtags
-Description: terminal-based package manager (GUI and terminal interfaces)
+Description: text mode package manager (GUI and terminal interfaces)
  aptitude is a package manager with a number of useful features,
  including: a mutt-like syntax for matching packages in a flexible
  manner, dselect-like persistence of user actions, the ability to
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
 Depends: aptitude (= ${binary:Version}) | aptitude-gtk (= ${binary:Version}), ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: libcwidget3-dbg
 Description: Debug symbols for the aptitude package manager
- aptitude is a terminal-based package manager with a number of useful
+ aptitude is a text mode package manager with a number of useful
  features, including: a mutt-like syntax for matching packages in a
  flexible manner, dselect-like persistence of user actions, the
  ability to retrieve and display the Debian changelog of most
@@ -81,8 +81,8 @@
 Provides: aptitude-doc
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Suggests: aptitude
-Description: Czech manual for aptitude, a terminal-based package manager
- aptitude is a terminal-based package manager.  This package contains
+Description: Czech manual for aptitude, a text mode package manager
+ aptitude is a text mode package manager.  This package contains
  the Czech version of the aptitude user's manual in HTML format.
 
 Package: aptitude-doc-en
@@ -92,8 +92,8 @@
 Provides: aptitude-doc
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Suggests: aptitude
-Description: English manual for aptitude, a terminal-based package manager
- aptitude is a terminal-based package manager.  This package contains
+Description: English manual for aptitude, a text mode package manager
+ aptitude is a text mode package manager.  This package contains
  the English version of the aptitude user's manual in HTML format.
 
 Package: aptitude-doc-es
@@ -103,8 +103,8 @@
 Provides: aptitude-doc
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Suggests: aptitude
-Description: Spanish manual for aptitude, a terminal-based package manager
- aptitude is a terminal-based package manager.  This package contains
+Description: Spanish manual for aptitude, a text mode package manager
+ aptitude is a text mode package manager.  This package contains
  the Spanish version of the aptitude user's manual in HTML format.
 
 Package: aptitude-doc-fi
@@ -114,8 +114,8 @@
 Provides: aptitude-doc
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Suggests: aptitude
-Description: Finnish manual for aptitude, a terminal-based package manager
- aptitude is a terminal-based package manager.  This package contains
+Description: Finnish manual for aptitude, a text mode package manager
+ aptitude is a text mode package manager.  This package contains
  the Finnish version of the aptitude user's manual in HTML format.
 
 Package: aptitude-doc-fr
@@ -125,8 +125,8 @@
 Provides: aptitude-doc
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Suggests: aptitude
-Description: French manual for aptitude, a terminal-based package manager
- aptitude is a terminal-based package manager.  This package contains
+Description: French manual for aptitude, a text mode package manager
+ aptitude is a text mode package manager.  This package contains
  the French version of the aptitude user's manual in HTML format.
 
 Package: aptitude-doc-ja
@@ -136,6 +136,6 @@
 Provides: aptitude-doc
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Suggests: aptitude
-Description: Japanese manual for aptitude, a terminal-based package manager
- aptitude is a terminal-based package manager.  This package contains
+Description: Japanese manual for aptitude, a text mode package manager
+ aptitude is a text mode package manager.  This package contains
  the Japanese version of the aptitude user's manual in HTML format.

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