Package: slapos.tool.format Version: N/A Severity: normal Tags: patch Dear Debian maintainer,
On Sunday, May 08, 2011, I notified you of the beginning of a review process concerning debconf templates for slapos.tool.format. The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates, and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report. Please review the suggested changes, and if you have any objections, let me know in the next 3 days. However, please try to avoid uploading slapos.tool.format with these changes right now. The second phase of this process will begin on Thursday, May 26, 2011, when I will coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates. The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will receive an updated PO file for their language. Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to the debian-i18n mailing list. Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with. The call for translation updates and new translations will run until about Thursday, June 16, 2011. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed or changed debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of course, other changes are safe. Please note that this is an approximative delay, which depends on my own availability to process this work and is influenced by the fact that I simultaneously work on many packages. Around Friday, June 17, 2011, I will contact you again and will send a final patch summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates, updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations). Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation. -- System Information: Debian Release: wheezy/sid APT prefers unstable APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (101, 'experimental') Architecture: i386 (i686) Kernel: Linux 2.6.38-2-686 (SMP w/2 CPU cores) Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968) Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
--- slapos.tool.format.old/debian/templates 2011-05-22 12:00:56.543933388 +0200 +++ slapos.tool.format/debian/templates 2011-05-23 07:51:45.310376515 +0200 @@ -1,23 +1,31 @@ +# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english +# team +# +# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask +# [email protected] for advice. +# +# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such +# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers. + Template: slapformat/master_url Type: string -_Description: The HTTP or HTTPS URL where the master node can be reached: +_Description: SlapOS master node URL: Template: slapformat/master_url_with_ssl_note Type: note -_Description: Note about HTTPS master URL - As you entered an HTTPS URL for the master node, you *must* put the - corresponding key and certificate respectively in - /etc/slapos/ssl/slapos.key and /etc/slapos/ssl/slapos.crt. - . - Also, make sure that the key is only readable by root user! +_Description: Master node key and certificate mandatory + You used an HTTPS URL for the SlapOS master node, so the corresponding + certificate must be placed in /etc/slapos/ssl/slapos.crt, and the key + in /etc/slapos/ssl/slapos.key, readable only to root. Template: slapformat/computer_id Type: string -_Description: ID to uniquely identifies this computer on the master: +_Description: SlapOS client ID: + Please specify a unique identifier for this SlapOS node. Template: slapformat/partition_amount Type: string -_Description: The number of partition available on this computer: +_Description: Number of Computer Partitions on this computer: A Computer Partition (CP) is an instance of a Software Release (SR). You can now define how many instances will be available on this computer. @@ -29,15 +37,14 @@ Template: slapformat/ipv4_local_network Type: string _Description: Local IPv4 network to be used for Computer Partitions: - Each Computer Partition (CP) must a local IPv4 took from the network - given here in CIDR notation. + Every Computer Partition must have an address on the same IPv4 network. + Please specify a network in CIDR notation (e.g.: 192.0.2.0/24). Template: slapformat/bridge_note Type: note -_Description: Note about network configuration - Before actually using slapformat script, you *must* set up a bridge - that will be used by the Computer Partitions and IPv6 must be - enabled (in most cases, it is already enabled by default though). +_Description: Network configuration note + Before using the slapformat script, you must set up a network bridge + to be used by the Computer Partitions, and ensure IPv6 is enabled. . - You can find examples of setting it up in + You can find more information in /usr/share/doc/slapformat/README.Debian. --- slapos.tool.format.old/debian/control 2011-05-22 12:00:56.579933554 +0200 +++ slapos.tool.format/debian/control 2011-05-22 12:00:56.503933180 +0200 @@ -21,10 +21,9 @@ bridge-utils, uml-utilities Breaks: ${python:Breaks} -Description: Prepare a client for deploying a SaaS system with SLAPos - Slapformat is supposed to be ran before Slapgrid in order to prepare - a SLAPos client. At the end a report is generated and information are - sent to configured SlapOS server. +Description: SaaS client deployment utility for SlapOS + This package provides a tool to prepare a SlapOS client before running + Slapgrid. It generates a report and sends the information to the + configured SlapOS server. . - SLAPos provides support for deploying a SaaS (Software as a Service) - system. + SlapOS systems are SaaS (Software as a Service) solutions.
