Package: src:apt-offline
Version: 1.1.1
Severity: minor
Tags: patch
I found some minor typos (apt->APT and missing full stops) in the package
descriptions of this source package while translating it via the DDTSS.
A patch for the control file is included.
Erik
-- System Information:
Debian Release: wheezy/sid
APT prefers testing
APT policy: (500, 'testing'), (10, 'experimental'), (10, 'unstable')
Architecture: i386 (i686)
Kernel: Linux 3.0.0-1-686-pae (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=de_AT.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=de_AT.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
--- control 2011-08-01 11:12:15.000000000 +0200
+++ control.new 2011-10-06 11:41:51.000000000 +0200
@@ -12,40 +12,40 @@
Package: apt-offline
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${python:Depends}, python-argparse, python, apt, less
-Description: offline apt package manager
- apt-offline is an Offline APT Package Manager
+Description: offline APT package manager
+ apt-offline is an Offline APT Package Manager.
.
apt-offline can fully update and upgrade an APT based distribution without
- connecting to the network, all of it transparent to apt
+ connecting to the network, all of it transparent to APT.
.
apt-offline can be used to generate a signature on a machine (with no network).
- This signature contains all download information required for the apt database
+ This signature contains all download information required for the APT database
system. This signature file can be used on another machine connected to the
internet (which need not be a Debian box and can even be running windows) to
download the updates.
- The downloaded data will contain all updates in a format understood by apt and
+ The downloaded data will contain all updates in a format understood by APT and
this data can be used by apt-offline to update the non-networked machine.
.
- apt-offline can also fetch bug reports and make them available offline
+ apt-offline can also fetch bug reports and make them available offline.
Package: apt-offline-gui
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${python:Depends}, apt-offline (= ${binary:Version}),
python-qt4
-Description: offline apt package manager - GUI
- apt-offline is an Offline APT Package Manager
+Description: offline APT package manager - GUI
+ apt-offline is an Offline APT Package Manager.
.
apt-offline can fully update and upgrade an APT based distribution without
- connecting to the network, all of it transparent to apt
+ connecting to the network, all of it transparent to APT.
.
apt-offline can be used to generate a signature on a machine (with no network).
- This signature contains all download information required for the apt database
+ This signature contains all download information required for the APT database
system. This signature file can be used on another machine connected to the
internet (which need not be a Debian box and can even be running windows) to
download the updates.
- The downloaded data will contain all updates in a format understood by apt and
+ The downloaded data will contain all updates in a format understood by APT and
this data can be used by apt-offline to update the non-networked machine.
.
- apt-offline can also fetch bug reports and make them available offline
+ apt-offline can also fetch bug reports and make them available offline.
.
- This package contains the Graphical User Interface to apt-offline
+ This package contains the graphical user interface to apt-offline.
