Please find, for review, the debconf templates and packages descriptions for the guacamole source package.
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2011.
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--- guacamole.old/debian/guacamole-tomcat.templates 2011-11-10
08:14:54.980853067 +0100
+++ guacamole/debian/guacamole-tomcat.templates 2011-11-14 07:19:28.566238881
+0100
@@ -2,8 +2,9 @@
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Restart Tomcat server?
- Installation of Guacamole under Tomcat requires restarting the Tomcat
+ The installation of Guacamole under Tomcat requires restarting the Tomcat
server, as Tomcat will only read configuration files on startup.
+ .
You can also restart Tomcat manually by running
- invoke-rc.d tomcat6 restart.
+ "invoke-rc.d tomcat6 restart" as root.
Justin, do you confirm that "The" is better here? I may be influenced
by some French roots..:-)
The other change is just adding quotes around the suggested command.
--- guacamole.old/debian/control 2011-11-10 08:14:54.980853067 +0100
+++ guacamole/debian/control 2011-11-14 07:20:59.585434707 +0100
@@ -15,10 +15,10 @@
Recommends: libguac-client-vnc0
Suggests: tomcat6 | jetty
Description: HTML5 web application for accessing remote desktops
- Guacamole is an HTML5 web application that provides access to your desktop
- using remote desktop protocols. A centralized server acts as a tunnel and
- proxy, allowing access to multiple desktops through a web browser; no plugins
- needed. The client requires nothing more than a web browser supporting HTML5
+ Guacamole is an HTML5 web application that provides access to a
+ desktop environment using remote desktop protocols. A centralized server acts
as a tunnel and
+ proxy, allowing access to multiple desktops through a web browser. No plugins
+ are needed: the client requires nothing more than a web browser supporting
HTML5
and AJAX.
Avoid "your" desktop. It's maybe not mine..:-)
Slight revamping of sentences.
Package: guacamole-tomcat
@@ -26,6 +26,12 @@
Architecture: all
Depends: debconf, guacamole, tomcat6, libguac-client-vnc0, ${misc:Depends}
Description: Tomcat-based Guacamole install with VNC support
+ Guacamole is an HTML5 web application that provides access to a
+ desktop environment using remote desktop protocols. A centralized server acts
as a tunnel and
+ proxy, allowing access to multiple desktops through a web browser. No plugins
+ are needed: the client requires nothing more than a web browser supporting
HTML5
+ and AJAX.
+ .
This metapackage depends on Tomcat, Guacamole, and the VNC support plugin for
guacamole. Guacamole is automatically installed and configured under
Tomcat.
Adding a boilerplate from the main package. That may help someone
browsing guacamole-tomcat package description without knowing what
Guacamole is (apart from being something very tasty to eat with
tortillas, of course).
--
Template: guacamole-tomcat/restart-server Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Restart Tomcat server? The installation of Guacamole under Tomcat requires restarting the Tomcat server, as Tomcat will only read configuration files on startup. . You can also restart Tomcat manually by running "invoke-rc.d tomcat6 restart" as root.
--- guacamole.old/debian/guacamole-tomcat.templates 2011-11-10
08:14:54.980853067 +0100
+++ guacamole/debian/guacamole-tomcat.templates 2011-11-14 07:19:28.566238881
+0100
@@ -2,8 +2,9 @@
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Restart Tomcat server?
- Installation of Guacamole under Tomcat requires restarting the Tomcat
+ The installation of Guacamole under Tomcat requires restarting the Tomcat
server, as Tomcat will only read configuration files on startup.
+ .
You can also restart Tomcat manually by running
- invoke-rc.d tomcat6 restart.
+ "invoke-rc.d tomcat6 restart" as root.
--- guacamole.old/debian/control 2011-11-10 08:14:54.980853067 +0100
+++ guacamole/debian/control 2011-11-14 07:20:59.585434707 +0100
@@ -15,10 +15,10 @@
Recommends: libguac-client-vnc0
Suggests: tomcat6 | jetty
Description: HTML5 web application for accessing remote desktops
- Guacamole is an HTML5 web application that provides access to your desktop
- using remote desktop protocols. A centralized server acts as a tunnel and
- proxy, allowing access to multiple desktops through a web browser; no plugins
- needed. The client requires nothing more than a web browser supporting HTML5
+ Guacamole is an HTML5 web application that provides access to a
+ desktop environment using remote desktop protocols. A centralized server acts
as a tunnel and
+ proxy, allowing access to multiple desktops through a web browser. No plugins
+ are needed: the client requires nothing more than a web browser supporting
HTML5
and AJAX.
Package: guacamole-tomcat
@@ -26,6 +26,12 @@
Architecture: all
Depends: debconf, guacamole, tomcat6, libguac-client-vnc0, ${misc:Depends}
Description: Tomcat-based Guacamole install with VNC support
+ Guacamole is an HTML5 web application that provides access to a
+ desktop environment using remote desktop protocols. A centralized server acts
as a tunnel and
+ proxy, allowing access to multiple desktops through a web browser. No plugins
+ are needed: the client requires nothing more than a web browser supporting
HTML5
+ and AJAX.
+ .
This metapackage depends on Tomcat, Guacamole, and the VNC support plugin for
guacamole. Guacamole is automatically installed and configured under
Tomcat.
Source: guacamole Priority: extra Maintainer: Michael Jumper <[email protected]> Build-Depends: po-debconf, debhelper (>= 7.0), cdbs, default-jdk | java6-sdk, maven-debian-helper, libmaven-war-plugin-java, libmaven-assembly-plugin-java, libmaven-plugin-testing-java, libslf4j-java, libservlet2.5-java Standards-Version: 3.9.2 Section: net Vcs-Git: git://guacamole.git.sourceforge.net/gitroot/guacamole/guacamole Vcs-Browser: http://guacamole.git.sourceforge.net/git/gitweb.cgi?p=guacamole/guacamole;a=tree Homepage: http://guacamole.sourceforge.net/ Package: guacamole Section: net Architecture: all Depends: guacd (>= 0.4), guacd (<< 0.5), ${misc:Depends} Recommends: libguac-client-vnc0 Suggests: tomcat6 | jetty Description: HTML5 web application for accessing remote desktops Guacamole is an HTML5 web application that provides access to a desktop environment using remote desktop protocols. A centralized server acts as a tunnel and proxy, allowing access to multiple desktops through a web browser. No plugins are needed: the client requires nothing more than a web browser supporting HTML5 and AJAX. Package: guacamole-tomcat Section: net Architecture: all Depends: debconf, guacamole, tomcat6, libguac-client-vnc0, ${misc:Depends} Description: Tomcat-based Guacamole install with VNC support Guacamole is an HTML5 web application that provides access to a desktop environment using remote desktop protocols. A centralized server acts as a tunnel and proxy, allowing access to multiple desktops through a web browser. No plugins are needed: the client requires nothing more than a web browser supporting HTML5 and AJAX. . This metapackage depends on Tomcat, Guacamole, and the VNC support plugin for guacamole. Guacamole is automatically installed and configured under Tomcat.
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