Hi, I have over the past few days checked in a number of changes to cdd/doc/common. My focus right now is just on spelling, grammar, and a few places where I thought things could be expressed more clearly. I have tried to keep style changes to a minimum, though I was sorely tempted to hack and slash even deeper. :)
(Andreas T., I had originally sent you a note asking about how far I should go with my edits, but my MTA on my laptop was broken at that time, and by the time I had fixed it, I had already made and committed many of the changes, so the note was moot. Anyway, please correct my corrections if I have misunderstood your intent anywhere.) I am beginning to leave some comments in the doc flagged [BA]. If anyone is interested in assisting, I'd like to resolve these outstanding issues too. You can easily see the changes I have made by refreshing your cvs sandboxes and in the cdd/doc/common directory doing: cdd diff -D'May 20' |less I want to particularly bring to the attention of each CDD representative here that I am currently making my way through the little blurbs in 03_general_ideas.sgml for each CDD project. I have given some careful consideration to my own and made many improvements. I am not quite as comfortable fixing the others, except for obvious places where fixes are needed. I have noted some questions I have in the comments, particularly for the debian-edu section, which is as far as I have come in my editing of this chapter to date. Ben
