Package: boot-floppies Version: kernel 2.2.15, potato test cycle 2 i386 Architecture: i386 model: PII 233MHz, chipset 440BX RAM: 128MB SCSI: Adaptec Ultra 160
In CD1 "Debian GNU/Linux 2.2 "Potato" - test-cycle-2 i386" french doc: "Installer Debian Linux 2.2 sur Intel x86" version 2.2.15, 06 June,2000 I have found some mistakes: - Page 10, Chapter 2.5.3, the line containing the ftp url does not fit in the page and is truncated - Page 24, Chapter 5.3 the line containing the http url //http.us.debian.org/debian... does not fit in the page and is truncated - Page 26, Chapter 5.3 the line describing fdisk.txt and cfdisk.txt does not fit in the page. - Page 32, chapter 6.1 the end of the line speaking about IBP PS/1 does not fit in the page: "hd=cylindres,t�tes,secteurs." - Page 34, chapter 6.6 the line containing the email address "[EMAIL PROTECTED]" does not fit in the page. - Page 34, chapter 6.6 some lines when describing a bug report does not fit in the page: the line that contains "scsi: nom de votre controleur..." the line that contains "cd-rom: mod�le de votre cdrom ..." the line that contains "carte r�seau: ..." - Page 42, chapter 7.16: "Le moment de v�rit�": .In case of installing from a CDROM, you must say to the user to eject the floppy and the cdrom .you must say something about MD5 menu .you must say something about Shadow passwords menu: the chapter 7.19 is misplaced in the document, because Debian installer asked to me about shadow password before asking for a root password. - Page 44, chapter 7.21: a little mistake in the french text: replace "Ensuite, vous allez arriv�" by "Ensuite, vous allez arriver" - Page 44, chapter 7.21: a little mistake in the french text: replace "souvenez de passer l'�tape" by "souvenez vous de passer l'�tape" - Page 44, chapter 7.21: a little mistake in the french text, in the line containing "Sinon, vous pouvez quitter dselect et reprendre plus tard" on the word "tard" and in the next sentence: "une fois que vous aurez r�cup�r� les paquets Debian sur votre syst�me" in the word "sur" - Page 45, chapter 7.23, a little mistake in the french text: replace "diificult�" by "difficult�" - Page 45, chapter 7.23, le line speaking on "/etc/chatscripts" does not fit in the page. - The chapter 7.23 on PPP is misplaced: I have been asked on PPP configuration after PCMCIA (chapter 7.20) - A chapter about "Apt configuration" should be written, after the new PPP chapter. The chapters order should be: PCMCIA,PPP,Apt configuration - A big problem: During install, I have never seen a menu for choosing "Profiles" Thank you for your good work -- --------------------------------------------------------------- Manuel Segura Responsable Informatique de l'ESCPI ESCPI - CNAM ---------------------------------------------------------------
