On Thu, Dec 13, 2001 at 11:13:48AM -0500, James A. Treacy wrote:
> Here are some suggestions to clean up the language a bit.
>
> On Thu, Dec 13, 2001 at 03:36:39PM +0100, Javier Fern�ndez-Sanguino Pe�a
> wrote:
> >
> "Debian 3.0 is much more secure that previous releases. The base installation
> provides
(...)
> packages from Debian that do not verify correctly, limiting the possibility of
> trojan packages and making it easier for systems to automatically upgrade
> over the
> ^^^^^^ safer?
> Internet. Lastly, Debian also provides extensive documentation for the
> security aware
> administrator, including the 'Securing Debian Manual' from the Debian
> Documentation
How about "and making it possible for administrators to set systems to
securely
and automatically upgrade over..."
>
> "Debian 3.0 has much better internationalization than previous releases
> thanks to the ongoing
> work of translation teams. Debian includes default settings for more
> languages than previous releases, and more of its programs are international
> ready.
> This includes the installation, which is translated to a number of
> ^ got rid of 'boot-floppies' since most readers would
> simply be confused by those words in this context
Fine by me. BTW, I checked boot-floppies and there are translations for
19
languages (are they all up to date? Don't know, ask Adam :)
JAvi
