Hi nori, On Sun, Aug 12, 2007 at 06:38:12PM +0900, Kobayashi Noritada wrote: > I've found some obvious mistakes and some nonobvious suspicious points > in the Etch Release Notes. Could you please find and apply the
it always the same: many missing tags such as <file>, <package> or <prgn> ... The problem is that this patch could unfuzzy again a few languages but maybe someone wants to unfuzzy these and send a patch for multiple languages? Someone? As long as we do not update the SGML file for PO based languages (by calling make update-po; make release-notes.<lang>.sgml) they will stay at 100%. So no need to worry (except that this patch is not yet applied to such languages). > attached patch to make improvements and corrections? I believe that > most of the corrections are good, but if the patch does some > overcorrections, sorry. Thanks for your patch. There is no reason not to apply it! I also think that proper tag usage simplifies the task of translators (no need to lookup a program name in a dictionary, ...) > --- release-notes.en.sgml.orig 2007-08-11 06:06:34.000000000 +0900 > +++ release-notes.en.sgml 2007-08-12 17:52:31.000000000 +0900 > @@ -716,11 +716,11 @@ > later do the same in the installed system. > To get the installer to load the firmware, one has to have network > connectivity while the machine is being installed in order to > - download the firmware-qlogic udeb package with wget, install it > + download the <package>firmware-qlogic</package> udeb package with > wget, install it wget could be tagged too ... > - <p>On a system with no X, no additional aptitude install command > should be > + <p>On a system with no X, no additional <tt>aptitude install</tt> > command should be "aptitude install" is no command (so <tt> is fine, <prgn> would be wrong)!? The command is aptitude! But let's ignore this ... > - check whether the command <tt/cat /dev/urandom > /dev/dsp/ works > for root.</p> > + check whether the command <tt>cat /dev/urandom > /dev/dsp</tt> > works for root.</p> Good catch! The first / from /dev closed the <tt> and the last / was wrong as /dev/dsp is a file not a directory. Thanks, again. Jens -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]
