Package: release-notes
Severity: minor
Tags: patch
Hi,
Please find the following minor issues spotted while translating and
reviewing translation.
Regards
David
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Index: en/about.dbk
Rationale: avoid use of non typographic quotes;
use the same writing as in the following paragraph.
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--- en/about.dbk (révision 8024)
+++ en/about.dbk (copie de travail)
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
<title>Introduction</title>
<para>
This document informs users of the &debian; distribution about
- major changes in version &release; (codenamed "&releasename;").
+ major changes in version &release; (codenamed &releasename;).
</para>
<para>
The release notes provide information on how to upgrade safely
Index: en/issues.dbk
Rationale: use the same writing as in other part of document;
avoid useless dot.
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--- en/issues.dbk (révision 8024)
+++ en/issues.dbk (copie de travail)
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
<title>pam_userdb.so breakage with newer libdb</title>
<para>
Some Berkeley Database version 7 files created with libdb3 cannot be read by
newer
-libdb versions. (see <ulink url="&url-bts;521860">bug#521860</ulink>).
+libdb versions (see bug <ulink url="&url-bts;521860">#521860</ulink>).
As a workaround, the files can be recreated with <command>db4.8_load</command>,
from the <systemitem role="package">db4.8-util</systemitem> package.
</para>
Index: en/whats-new.dbk
Rationale: Capitalize Debian Installer;
delete a double space
(long line is a PITA, not changed here).
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--- en/whats-new.dbk (révision 8024)
+++ en/whats-new.dbk (copie de travail)
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@
</para>
<para>
-For &releasename; APT automatically installs recommended packages by
default<footnote><para>This change implies that disk requirements for tasks
selected through the debian installer have increased too. For more information
please
+For &releasename; APT automatically installs recommended packages by
default<footnote><para>This change implies that disk requirements for tasks
selected through the Debian Installer have increased too. For more information
please
see the <quote>Disk Space Needed for Tasks</quote> chapter in the
<ulink url="&url-install-manual;">Installation
Guide</ulink>.</para></footnote>.
This can be changed by adding the following line in
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