On Tue, Jan 04, 2011 at 09:11:26PM +0900, Osamu Aoki wrote: > @@ -55,7 +56,7 @@ > <para> > Please follow the channel guidelines, respecting other users fully. The > guidelines are available at the <ulink > -url="&url-wiki;DebianIRC">Debian Wiki</ulink>. > +url="&url-wiki;DebianIRC">Debian Wiki: DebianIRC</ulink>. > </para> > <para> > For more information on OFTC please visit the <ulink
I don't think this is an improvement. The text does not read well; one would never say "The guidelines are available at the Debian Wiki: DebianIRC". You could say "The guidelines are available at the DebianIRC page in the Debian wiki", but I think the original text was also perfectly fine. -- Steve Langasek Give me a lever long enough and a Free OS Debian Developer to set it on, and I can move the world. Ubuntu Developer http://www.debian.org/ [email protected] [email protected] -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [email protected] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [email protected] Archive: http://lists.debian.org/[email protected]
