Your message dated Thu, 02 Apr 2015 15:47:45 +0200 with message-id <[email protected]> and subject line Re: Bug#781704: release-notes: proofreading for upgrading.dbk has caused the Debian Bug report #781704, regarding release-notes: proofreading for upgrading.dbk to be marked as done.
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--- Begin Message ---Package: release-notes Severity: normal Tags: patch Most of the upgrading file is familiar stuff, but this bit needs a couple of tweaks: > --- upgrading.dbk.pristine 2015-04-01 19:00:01.309706731 +0100 > +++ upgrading.dbk 2015-04-01 20:49:57.881522911 +0100 > @@ -186,9 +186,9 @@ > <section id="recovery-shell-systemd"> > <title>Debug shell during boot using systemd</title> > <para> > - In case the boot fails under systemd, it is possible to obtain a > + If the boot fails under systemd, it is possible to obtain a For many English-speakers, "in case X happens, do Y" means "to ensure X doesn't happen, always do Y". > debug root shell by changing the kernel command line. If the > - basic boot succeeds, but some of the services fails to start, it > + basic boot succeeds, but some services fail to start, it > may be useful to add <literal>systemd.unit=rescue.target</literal> > to the kernel parameters. > </para> The services that might fail aren't definite (and aren't singular). -- JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package--- upgrading.dbk.pristine 2015-04-01 19:00:01.309706731 +0100 +++ upgrading.dbk 2015-04-01 20:49:57.881522911 +0100 @@ -186,9 +186,9 @@ <section id="recovery-shell-systemd"> <title>Debug shell during boot using systemd</title> <para> - In case the boot fails under systemd, it is possible to obtain a + If the boot fails under systemd, it is possible to obtain a debug root shell by changing the kernel command line. If the - basic boot succeeds, but some of the services fails to start, it + basic boot succeeds, but some services fail to start, it may be useful to add <literal>systemd.unit=rescue.target</literal> to the kernel parameters. </para>
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--- Begin Message ---On 2015-04-01 22:01, Justin B Rye wrote: > Package: release-notes > Severity: normal > Tags: patch > > Most of the upgrading file is familiar stuff, but this bit needs a > couple of tweaks: > >> [...] Thanks, applied as-is. ~Niels
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