On Tue, May 25, 2021 at 10:41:36AM +0300, Andrei POPESCU wrote:
>On Lu, 24 mai 21, 21:38:57, Paul Gevers wrote:
>>
>> How does the attached proposed text look?
>>
>> +  <section id="scsi-non-deterministic">
>> +    <title>SCSI device probing is non-deterministic</title>
>> +    <para>
>> +      Due to changes in Linux, the probing of SCSI devices is no
>> +      longer deteministic. This can be an issue for installations that
>> +      rely on the disk order. The <ulink
>> +      
>> url="https://lore.kernel.org/lkml/[email protected]/";>Linux
>> +      Kernel Mail List</ulink> suggests two solutions.
>> +    </para>
>> +  </section>
>
>Slightly more verbose:
>
>    Due to changes in the Linux kernel the probing of SCSI devices is no
>    longer deterministic. This could be an issue for installations that
>    rely on the disk probing order. Two possible alternatives using
>    links in /dev/disk/by-path or an udev rule are suggested in this
>    Linux Kernel Mailing List post.

The existing text left me wanting just a bit more explanation,
you've nailed it now.

A tiny nit - I think 'or a udev rule' is more idiomatic.

Kind regards
Vince

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