Sven Hoexter wrote: > On Mon, Jun 16, 2003 at 09:28:33AM +0200, Martin Schulze wrote: > > Hi Joey, > > > Could people please proofread > > <http://luonnotar.infodrom.org/~joey/LT/2003/debian.html> which will > > be put on the CD as well. Ignore the broken images for the moment, > > they'll be fixed later. > > > > The text and external links are more important. > > Der Gro�teil der Software unterliegt der GPL oder �hnlichen freien Lizenzen, > somit wird auch der Quellcode selbstverst�ndlich zur Verf�gung gestellt. > > I woud say or write: > Der Gro�teil der Software unterliegt der GPL oder �hnlichen freien Lizenzen, > somit wird selbstverstaendlich auch der Quellcode zur Verf�gung gestellt. > > > All the Links to http://luonnotar.infodrom.org/~joey/LT/2003/<whatever> > are dead. Looks like you convertet from 2002 to 2003 without copying the
Of course. I only took the debian.html file you provided via mail. I had hoped the missing files were on the CD already. If they aren't, do you have a spare CD from last year to copy theim over? > files. The GPL link for example could be a direct link to one of > the GNU pages. > http://www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl.html I was about to use that, but since there was a local one already, I had hoped that the gpl was stored locally. > > http://www.tu-harburg.de/dlhp/ > is now > http://www.linuxhaven.de/dlhp/ Corrected. > http://thor.prohosting.com/~chrordig/Primax/ is now > is now > http://primax.sourceforge.net/ Corrected > http://www.i2k.com/~jeffd/a4s2/ > seems to be obsolete cause it's included in sane Removed. > To be fair please add a link for emacs users to the editor resources: > http://en.tldp.org/HOWTO/Emacs-Beginner-HOWTO.html Added. Anything else? Do you have all sponsor logos locally? Regards, Joey -- Beware of bugs in the above code; I have only proved it correct, not tried it. -- Donald E. Knuth
