On Mon, Feb 18, 2002 at 02:11:03PM -0400, Ben Armstrong wrote: Heya Ben,
> Junior-doc has rapidly progressed to version 1.7, which is available > at the above URL and in incoming. So if you're going to check it > out, please ignore 1.6, as quite a bit has changed since then. Yes. It is coming along nicely. I like the What Now?(4) section. It encourages participation in the project. > 3. Getting Started: > Now that you know what Debian Jr. is all about, you are probably dying > to get it installed and play around. (For the kids of course.) I think this will sound better if more detailed information is given in the Introduction(1) - the introduction could be extended a little. You could point out that in addition to the many games included with debian-junior, there are system tools such as midnight commander, xcruise (helps to visualize the filesystem), and lavaps - the process and resource-use visualizing app. Also you could mention that there are internet tools, math learning programs, a desktop, and sound and writing skills apps. Then saying, "...you are probably dying to get it installed...", in the Getting Started(3) section will sound better I reckon. Is the "hello" package included with debian-junior, by the way? Should it perhaps be included? Kind regards, Anthony Rowe
