Rationale: try to simplify the first paragraph and remove an ambiguous "it"; use "device" as the noun of "audio device" in the second paragraph and remove a "however"; make third paragraph more direct.
--- nas.templates 2007-09-03 09:25:16.000000000 +0100 +++ nas.templates.mod 2007-09-03 09:29:10.000000000 +0100 @@ -2,16 +2,16 @@ Type: boolean Default: true _Description: Should nasd release /dev/dsp? - The NAS server will by default open the audio device configured on the - system at startup, and then keep it open until it is stopped. This will - stop any audio clients that are not NAS-aware from using the audio device. + By default, the NAS server will open the configured audio device + at startup, and then keep it open until the server is stopped. This will + stop any non-NAS-aware audio clients from using the audio device. . The daemon can be configured to release the audio device when it is - not actively using it, however with some delay after the - application completes and the audio is available. + not using it, with some delay after the + application completes and the device is available. . - An alternative is using the "audiooss" package to wrap any programs - that use /dev/dsp directly to use the equivalent NAS calls. + An alternative is to use the "audiooss" package to wrap any programs + that use /dev/dsp to make them use equivalent NAS calls. Template: nas/mixer Type: boolean -- MJR/slef My Opinion Only: see http://people.debian.org/~mjr/ Please follow http://www.uk.debian.org/MailingLists/#codeofconduct -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]
