Vincent Bernat <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > I have packaged sshproxy (a proxy for SSH ;-) ). Here is the current > description: > > Package: sshproxy > Description: ssh gateway to apply ACLs on ssh connections
Repeated "ssh" - remove one. Maybe expand "ACLs" either here, or in the descriptions. If it's such a key feature, why isn't it in the longer description? The package name gives me more clue about what it does than the short description, so maybe a total rewrite is a good idea: "ssh gateway based on permission lists, not keys or passwords"? But I might still misunderstand what sshproxy actually does and I've not time to install it today. [...] > This package provides mysql backend. Should be "This package provides the mysql backend." or maybe "This package provides a mysql backend." > This package provides extra plugins : console-extra, acl-funcs, > logusers, alternate-login, remote-logging and telnetclient No space before : in English, please. (So "plugins: console-extra,") > Any improvement on the descriptions is welcome. Hope that helps, -- MJR/slef My Opinion Only: see http://people.debian.org/~mjr/ Please follow http://www.uk.debian.org/MailingLists/#codeofconduct -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]
