Justin B Rye <[email protected]> writes: > apt-extracttemplates.1.xml is trivial; the only thing I'd suggest for > it is > > <refnamediv> > <refname>apt-extracttemplates</refname> > - <refpurpose>Utility to extract DebConf config and templates from Debian > packages</refpurpose> > + <refpurpose>Utility to extract debconf config and templates from Debian > packages</refpurpose> > </refnamediv> > > (DebConf is the annual event, debconf is the executable.)
Both those statements are correct; but what is being named here is not the executable, but the configuration database. Maybe “Debconf” for that term? > Perhaps s/stdout/standard output/ (or s/stdout/STDOUT/) throughout. Either leave it as “stdout” (a term of art, probably appropriate for the intended audience) or use “standard output”. I don't think “STDOUT” will help. > > <para> > > The <literal>generate</literal> command uses a configuration file to > > describe the > > archives that are going to be generated. It follows the typical ISC > > configuration format as seen in ISC tools like bind 8 and dhcpd. > ^ > AFAIK it's the same in bind9, so drop the version number. The name of the system is “BIND”, an acronym. (The executable program has a completely different name.) -- \ “You don't need a book of any description to help you have some | `\ kind of moral awareness.” —Dr. Francesca Stavrakoloulou, bible | _o__) scholar, 2011-05-08 | Ben Finney -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [email protected] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [email protected] Archive: http://lists.debian.org/[email protected]
