-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA256 On 07/08/13 16:53, David Prévot wrote: > The last updated version is available on the publicity Subversion > repository, even via HTTP: > http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/announcements/en/2013/20130808.wml?view=markup
"20th > > Debian Birthday" should be something like "20th Birthday of Debian" or more usually "Debian's 20th Birthday" because I can't think when a native speaker ever writes "Nth NAME Birthday" like that. "which will take place on 16 August 2013 in Le Camp, in Vaumarcus, Switzerland, during this year's annual Debian conference," should be "which will take place on 16 August 2013, during this year's annual Debian conference, in Le Camp, in Vaumarcus, Switzerland" because the birthday happens everywhere, not only in Le Camp. "During the Debian Birthday" should be "During Debian's Birthday" or more usually "On Debian's Birthday" I'm assuming everything below "About Debian" has been checked before. > (all DDs already have commit access, I don't remember how, I'm a bit restricted just now and I wanted to get the above to you ASAP. Hope that helps, - -- MJ Ray (slef), member of www.software.coop, a for-more-than-profit co-op http://koha-community.org supporter, web and library systems developer. In My Opinion Only: see http://mjr.towers.org.uk/email.html Available for hire (including development) at http://www.software.coop/ -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.10 (GNU/Linux) Comment: Using GnuPG with Icedove - http://www.enigmail.net/ iQIcBAEBCAAGBQJSA69JAAoJELJrzKUj/txjIx0P/jd8/MCiyGbbXF3GMEWyD+8S sePEV6hy7KF2FXFQXg0kROZ/quw6vfPFQXKxFvNEu1Fl8mA+0HsgI3lZTM1eXy4r n6GXNHdalwXhhejcJk4CCXxYYX3VweuLhzHL6gKdd23IUQ+7l7arjDH66+RNTd/o KsIE/aYHLRFSgzc0AExmSaC7DozHHK9Gat3gxNwdldOiVbAAhsFEv0wK5A/CW+xU l+Awiv2SFrmgfbb0IKHGuqyrmYr7ARfEe8tqacXsJJj50hsBNgV+JTIcfdZSfzJC 8m78lxU7n6qYcWr9+3E8dzWY78bT8qRUZFYz5qeCkQBP9BElxrLSPwHilnfu7gQB IjzNyc6YIwelJ4QvUJqlPtEkG/sksqt5QoeNo39XbBa9IU8P4WGjOBfvZKtgCGi6 5Y2835SIFYBIN3bG2caqvK5ewSGLpgjgekTsCvP84VGm0bu3GD06qk9haLrqovg7 NP08HLeh+EeD1RdHcmOLm4gCxQe9RdHsFfDlJBaOPzcQaHL2AaWJ331SCV/8XEQ8 /Xj3qq6WNOxvqG7gAQP3+XwJZoOxRpL7ekb/EvUzAH4p9vH6WAX7TtGc4MdO/67r hRsV5zqjxWMeALV2u8KZRmsd99vLNDziBU1ADkqgkfgO2d469Y2zaHp0De2VGkbC Mp3A4CLwj6/frUi0rg5s =J7Vk -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [email protected] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [email protected] Archive: http://lists.debian.org/[email protected] -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [email protected] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [email protected] Archive: http://lists.debian.org/[email protected]
