On Tue, 10 Apr 2018 at 22:38:49 +0100, Justin B Rye wrote: > The one part where I've got any doubts about the English is in the > part covered by your "[etc.]": > > notification area, volume controls and the battery charge indicator, > and utilities ranging from weather forecast to system monitoring. > ^^^ ^ ^^^ > Ands and ands and ands, plus oddly phrased "forecast" alongside > "monitoring". Maybe if they were "forecasts" and "monitors"...
This is awkwardly worded but not misleading, so I consider it a lower priority than making the Description stop saying gnome-panel is still a key part of GNOME. smcv