On Tue, 10 Apr 2018 at 22:38:49 +0100, Justin B Rye wrote:
> The one part where I've got any doubts about the English is in the
> part covered by your "[etc.]":
> 
>     notification area, volume controls and the battery charge indicator,
>     and utilities ranging from weather forecast to system monitoring.
>     ^^^                                       ^                  ^^^ 
> Ands and ands and ands, plus oddly phrased "forecast" alongside
> "monitoring".  Maybe if they were "forecasts" and "monitors"...

This is awkwardly worded but not misleading, so I consider it a lower
priority than making the Description stop saying gnome-panel is still
a key part of GNOME.

    smcv

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