Hi, On Tue, 14 Apr 2015, Neil McGovern wrote: > Diff attached! There's not a particular problem, I was trying to work > out the audience. We can me more blunt with developers than in an > official announcement from the project.
Thanks, merged into https://titanpad.com/x9keVJLExl The only part that sounds weird is the sentence “The current team resources are only enough to keep up with the observed workload, and would be unable to extend this further.”. First you dropped the "Yet" that started the sentence, I have the feeling that it was an important articulation. Thus I added a "Despite this" in front of it now. I don't know if it's better. But the part that sounds weird is the second half, which implicitly reads as “The current team resources […] would be unable to extend this further”. I'm not an English native speaker but this sounds clunky to me. maybe “would not be sufficient to extend this further” ? or “do not allow the project to extend this furher” ? Cheers, -- Raphaël Hertzog ◈ Debian Developer Support Debian LTS: http://www.freexian.com/services/debian-lts.html Learn to master Debian: http://debian-handbook.info/get/ -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [email protected] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [email protected] Archive: https://lists.debian.org/[email protected]
