Author: moeller
Date: 2009-09-11 08:49:30 +0000 (Fri, 11 Sep 2009)
New Revision: 3962

Modified:
   trunk/community/website/organisations.xsl
Log:
Fine-tuned wording of intro to support.xml page.


Modified: trunk/community/website/organisations.xsl
===================================================================
--- trunk/community/website/organisations.xsl   2009-09-11 08:14:54 UTC (rev 
3961)
+++ trunk/community/website/organisations.xsl   2009-09-11 08:49:30 UTC (rev 
3962)
@@ -92,19 +92,30 @@
     <xsl:for-each select="support">
      <h1>Sources for support for packages in Debian Med</h1>
        <p>
-         With Debian, there are several sources for support. Firstly, there is 
the maintainer of the packages, who can be reached with 
-         "<tt>reportbug </tt><i>packagename</i>" from the command line. The 
maintainer is commonly the Debian Med mailing list, please
-          be aware that your email will be picked up by google and the public 
may learn about your activities this way.
+         With Debian, there are several sources for support. Firstly,
+         there is the maintainer of the packages, who can be reached
+         with "<tt>reportbug </tt><i>packagename</i>" from the command
+         line. The maintainer is commonly the Debian Med mailing list,
+         please be aware that your email will be picked up by google
+         and the public may learn about your activities this way.
        </p>
        <p>
-         You may prefer to contact contributors of Debian Med directly or ask 
to be contacted on the mailing list. You can find
-         partners for scientific projects, delegate some analyses, ask for 
some development or offer internships of various kinds
-         for students. And yes, you'd need to pay for that.
+         You may prefer to contact individual contributors to Debian
+         Med directly or ask to be contacted on the mailing list. This
+         way, you can find partners for scientific projects, delegate
+         some analyses, ask for some development or offer internships
+         of various kinds for students. And yes, it is not unlikely
+         you'd be asked to pay for that.
        </p>
        <p>
-         Finally, as a commercial entity you should be aware that you are not 
alone in your decision for Debian as a distribution. For
-         a general support of Debian you will find contacts in your area on <a 
href="http://www.debian.org/consultants/";>www.debian.org/consultants</a>.
-         For support for our packages Debian Med that demand a rather highly 
specialised domain knowledge, the following companies came to our attention:
+         Finally, as a commercial entity you should rest assured
+         that you are not alone in your decision for Debian
+         as a distribution. For a general support of Debian
+         you will find professional contacts in your area on
+         <a 
href="http://www.debian.org/consultants/";>www.debian.org/consultants</a>.
+         For support for our packages Debian Med that demand a rather
+         highly specialised domain knowledge, the following companies
+         came to our attention:
        </p>
      <hr />
      <table border="0">


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