Hi Salvatore,

thanks for the review! Finally I had some time to work on the package.
See my comments below.

Am 12.05.2012 um 10:02 schrieb Salvatore Bonaccorso:
> On Sun, May 06, 2012 at 05:08:42PM +0200, Thilo Uttendorfer wrote:
>> Package: sponsorship-requests
>> Severity: wishlist
>> 
>> Dear mentors,
>> 
>> I am looking for a sponsor for my package "logsurfer"
>> 
>>  Package name    : logsurfer
>>  Version         : 1.8-2
>>  Upstream Author : Kerry Thompson<[email protected]>
>>  URL             : http://www.crypt.gen.nz/logsurfer/
>>  License         : BSD
>>  Section         : admin
> 
> I had a quick look at it and would like to make some suggestions:
> 
> - I: logsurfer: extended-description-is-probably-too-short

fixed.


> - short description: could you change it to have it matchng
>   "logsurfer is a" <short description>. (e.g. real-time system log
>   monitoring).

fixed (but lintian does not allow to start with the package name)


> - Running lintian with '-I' it get the following:
> 
>   I: logsurfer: spelling-error-in-binary usr/bin/logsurfer childs children
>   I: logsurfer: extended-description-is-probably-too-short
>   I: logsurfer: hyphen-used-as-minus-sign 
> usr/share/man/man1/logsurfer.1.gz:136
>   I: logsurfer: hyphen-used-as-minus-sign 
> usr/share/man/man1/logsurfer.1.gz:141
>   I: logsurfer: hyphen-used-as-minus-sign 
> usr/share/man/man1/logsurfer.1.gz:145
>   I: logsurfer: hyphen-used-as-minus-sign 
> usr/share/man/man1/logsurfer.1.gz:162
>   I: logsurfer: hyphen-used-as-minus-sign 
> usr/share/man/man1/logsurfer.1.gz:166
>   I: logsurfer: hyphen-used-as-minus-sign 
> usr/share/man/man1/logsurfer.1.gz:168
>   I: logsurfer: spelling-error-in-manpage usr/share/man/man1/logsurfer.1.gz 
> expresion expression
>   I: logsurfer: spelling-error-in-manpage usr/share/man/man1/logsurfer.1.gz 
> expresion expression
>   I: logsurfer: FSSTND-dir-in-manual-page 
> usr/share/man/man4/logsurfer.conf.4.gz:249 /var/adm/
>   I: logsurfer: hyphen-used-as-minus-sign 
> usr/share/man/man4/logsurfer.conf.4.gz:300

all fixed except of  "FSSTND-dir-in-manual-page" 


>   It would be great if you could add patches for the spelling errors
>   and sent them to upstream to have them added in their new upstream
>   releases.

done.


> - logsurfer.conf manpage should go to section 5 'File formats and
>   conventions eg /etc/passwd'.

done.


> - Generally: For the first upload it would only be neede to have the
>   changelog entry for the Initial upload. Furthermore use (Closes:
>   #nnnn) for the closer. Otherwise the changes file will not include
>   the Closes field to close #670875.
> 
> [1]: 
> http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/developers-reference/best-pkging-practices.html#bpp-pkg-desc
> 
> 
> Thilo, as said I do not have time (at the moment) to fully go trough
> the package, hope that someone can have a look too. It would be great
> to have logsurfer in Debian.

I uploaded a new package (1.8-3):
http://mentors.debian.net/package/logsurfer

Thanks,
Thilo


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