Ben Finney <[email protected]> writes:
> Jakub Wilk <[email protected]> writes:
>> * Russ Allbery <[email protected]>, 2010-06-16, 11:07:

>> >+         continue to do so (but be aware that this is often an error
>> >+         that should be fixed rather than using <tt>Conflicts</tt> --
>> >+         see, for example, <ref id="binaries">),</item>

>> I find the phrase in parentheses awkwardly worded. (I am not a native
>> speaker.)

> How about this:

> +           continue to do so (but be aware that this is often an error,
> +           and it should be fixed instead of using <tt>Conflicts</tt>.
> +           See, for example, <ref id="binaries">),</item>

The reason why it's phrased the way it is was to avoid complete sentences
inside a parenthetical embedded in the middle of another sentence.  Maybe
I should just make that a separate paragraph or something.  Ugh.

-- 
Russ Allbery ([email protected])               <http://www.eyrie.org/~eagle/>


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