Ben Finney <[email protected]> writes:

> I tripped mentally over this several times, before I realised there's an
> ambiguous referent for “it” and “the package”. I suggest instead:

> -       Sometimes, a package requires another package to be installed
> -       <em>and</em> configured before it can be installed. In this
> -       case, you must specify a <tt>Pre-Depends</tt> entry for
> -       the package.
> +       Sometimes, unpacking a package requires that another package be
> +       unpacked <em>and</em> configured. In this case, the dependent
> +       package must specify this dependency in a <tt>Pre-Depends</tt>
> +       entry.

I now have (a slight revision of) that change in my copy.  Thanks!

-- 
Russ Allbery ([email protected])               <http://www.eyrie.org/~eagle/>


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