Stéphane Blondon <stephane.blon...@gmail.com> writes:

>  - for (draft sphinx) release-notes: 
> http://stephane.yaal.fr/tmp/release-notes/
>
> What do you think about it?

commenting on the release-notes, but i expect applies to policy too:

looks awesome - imo it is now even better-looking than the docbook verison

in the tables, eg package list under
   http://stephane.yaal.fr/tmp/release-notes/whats-new.html runningnthe
   mouse over the rows and headers does some changes to the font which
   is a bit confusing, eg the "dark" rows end up near-white on white:
   suggest disabling this

http://stephane.yaal.fr/tmp/release-notes/issues.html#grub-no-longer-runs-os-prober-by-default
the '# dpkg-reconfigure <grub>' is shown as a shell-comment, but is
meant to be a command-to-run-as-root (i remember this being discussed on
the previous version on the release-notes list, and i thought someone
had posted a way to fix it?)

When things are in the orange-on-grey boxes it looks to me like the grey
   boxes are not quite vertically centred, eg in
   
http://stephane.yaal.fr/tmp/release-notes/issues.html#rsyslog-changes-affecting-log-analyzers-such-as-logcheck

   the 'rsyslog' beofre the closing parenthesis the top of box is
   aligned to the top of the ")" but the bottom of the box extends
   below)

  (and i wonder if a slightly darker (ie red-er) orange would be a bit
  more readable, or wether changing foreground and adding the box is a
  bit much?)


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