Hi, Justin B Rye <justin.byam....@gmail.com> wrote (Sat, 1 May 2021 11:54:06 +0100): > Holger Wansing wrote: > > I would suggest this change: > > > > > > By subscribing to the Debian announcement mailing list, you will receive > > a > > I don't much like this, though I'm not sure it matters: pedantically, > you don't receive notifications by subscribing, you receive them by > being/remaining subscribed. Alternatives include: > If you subscribe the d-a ML you will receive a notification [...] > Subscribe to the d-a ML to receive a notification [...] > Subscribers to the d-a ML will receive a notification [...] > > > notification every time Debian makes a new release. Such as when bullseye > > (Why is there a full stop here? A comma would do.) > > > - changes from e.g. stable to oldstable. > > + changes from e.g. testing to stable. > > (Given that this sentence introduced itself as an example, the "e.g." > seems a bit redundant.) > > > because this chapter reads about releasing Bullseye as a new Debian > > version. > > And that's the process of turning "testing" into "stable". > > (the event of "stable" being turned into "oldstable" is only a by-product > > IMO). > > > > I can do that change including the sync of translations, if you like. > > Your suggestion does have the advantage of being easy to avoid > bothering translators for!
I only did this - changes from e.g. stable to oldstable. + changes from e.g. testing to stable. changing now (including translations). Sorry, Justin :-) Holger -- Holger Wansing <hwans...@mailbox.org> PGP-Fingerprint: 496A C6E8 1442 4B34 8508 3529 59F1 87CA 156E B076