* Nathanael Nerode ([EMAIL PROTECTED]) [040327 23:10]: > How about "...entirely free software. This includes programs, > documentation, data, and any other works which are part of the Debian > system (except possibly license texts which are distributed only for legal > reasons). We provide the guidelines..."
The idea is definitly good. However, I'm not satisfied with the wording and the place in the text. > > 3.: keep the word "immediately" instead of "promptly" (as this is, at > > least in my opinion, easier to understand for non-native speakers). > It means something different; "promptly" is as soon as is reasonable; > "immediately" is *right this minute, before you go downstairs*. Well, I consider it of much more importance that the intention is clear for as many people as possible, even if it is not 100% exact. But perhaps there is a better way to express it both clear and more precise. Cheers, Andi -- http://home.arcor.de/andreas-barth/ PGP 1024/89FB5CE5 DC F1 85 6D A6 45 9C 0F 3B BE F1 D0 C5 D1 D9 0C -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]
