I just committed some minor changes that you (Joy) shouldn't have any problem with. Here are the sections I'm still not happy about. Only two left. :)
<P>Debian does not make any money from the sale of CDs, and we do have expenses. Please buy from one of the This is awkward. The reason I joined the clauses with 'but' was to show that while we don't have a steady income stream, we need some money to pay for expenses. Here is another attempt at an acceptable change <P>Debian does not make any money from the sale of CDs. At the same time, money is needed to pay for expenses such as domain registration and hardware. Thus, we ask that you buy from one of the I still say the following makes it sound like we are going to charge for someone to download off the net. <H2><a name="CD">You say free, but the CDs/bandwidth cost money!</a></H2> Additionally, if someone in the next town said they had a free bicycle for you, you wouldn't tell them, "it's not really free since I have to drive there to get it". Again, I suggest the bandwidth part be dropped. On a related note, I have made some changes to why_debian, including another plus - Debian is the best integrated linux distribution. -- James (Jay) Treacy Once a curmudgeon, always a curmudgeon [EMAIL PROTECTED]

