On Tue, Aug 31, 2004 at 08:46:56PM +0200, Florian Ernst wrote: > I'd really like to see a native speaker comment on this. > > The patch can be found at <http://ernst.uni-hd.de/debian/english.diff>. > > The original posting can be seen at > <http://lists.debian.org/debian-www/2004/08/msg00289.html>.
Just a couple of suggestions for your consideration. manpage. The proposal states more explicitly that the lack of a manpage is a # My understanding is that 'manpage' should be 'man page' however, I don't # know if it is worth changing all/any of them. that library and breaks net installs until the dependent modules are rebuild. s/rebuild/rebuilt Being familiar with the Unix environment (and specially GNU userland, found in s/specially/especially also contains more upstream bugfixes wrt. dots in hostnames and unproper HTML s/wrt./regarding s/unproper/improper message might overflow a buffer and which could result into executing arbitrary s/into/in -- Doug Jensen

