Hi,

David Prévot <[email protected]> wrote:
> Le 14/02/2012 05:30, Paul Wise a écrit :
> > The attached patch replaces Debian GNU/Linux with Debian where relevant
> > and makes other changes needed to fix #614233. I would like some review
> > here, especially on stuff that isn't strictly in the realm of the
> > website team.
> 
> Thanks, I also took care of translations almost everywhere. I would

One comment on this change:

- Debian is the name of the project, and Debian GNU/Linux is how the
- distribution we create is called.
+ Debian is the name of the project, and Debian is how the
+ distribution we create is called.

I would propose to change this into:

"Debian is the name of the project and also the name of the
distribution we create."

... to avoid duplication.
Comments?

Holger

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