On Wed, 29 Oct 2014, Holger Wansing wrote: > > Feel free to rephrase anything that is unclear or ambiguous. > > So, would you feel comfortable with the following patch?
Looks OK for me. Except "is aN organization" (you need to add the "n" I put in captial otherwise it's not good). But maybe the opinion of a native english speaker would be better... > <p> > The <a href="https://france.debian.net/";>Debian France Association</a> is a > -1901 registered organisation in France founded to support and promote the > +organisation registered in France under the <q>law of 1901</q>, > +founded to support and promote the > Debian Project in France. > </p> Cheers, -- Raphaël Hertzog ◈ Debian Developer Support Debian LTS: http://www.freexian.com/services/debian-lts.html Learn to master Debian: http://debian-handbook.info/get/ -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [email protected] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [email protected] Archive: https://lists.debian.org/[email protected]
