Hi, the new page is definitely better. I think linking to other pages for users who want to dig deeper would be great, for example:
- "democratic governance structure" should link to https://www.debian.org/devel/constitution - I do not see https://www.debian.org/social_contract linked anywhere, but it should probably be (one of the major reasons to choose Debian) Regards Le jeu. 26 sept. 2019 à 01:37, Qobi Ben Nun <[email protected]> a écrit : > > Hey, > > Em qua, 2019-09-25 às 23:22 +0200, Thomas Lange escreveu: > > Hi, > > > > I like to get some feedback for a part of the new Debian > > homepage. It's not yet released, we are still working on it. > > I've rewrote the page https://www.debian.org/intro/why_debian because > > its content is obsolete and outdated. Here you can see the current > > version: > > > > https://debian-newhomepage.larjona.net/intro/why_debian > > > > I like to get some feedback on this new page. First I like to ask > > some > > native speakers to check the text. If you have some minor changes > > like > > typos, feel free just directly push the changes into the git > > repository > > https://salsa.debian.org/webmaster-team/webwml/tree/new-homepage > > > > If you think bigger parts of the text need to be changed, if topics > > are missing, please open a merge request or send me an email with you > > proposal, so I can review the change. If possible, I like to do no > > major changes to this page. > > > > All I can say is that everything is OK. One of the things I like most > is 'What our users say'. Fantastic approach! > > Regards > -- > Qobi Ben Nun
