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Stan Bradbury commented on DERBY-380: ------------------------------------- Stans review: %%%% Developers Guide: Derby and Standards %%%% This section consists of a single table that spans approximately 5 pages in the PDF document. Because the columns in this table were jumbled I used the following HTML document from the IBM Cloudscape 10 site for this review. This source URL is: http://publib.boulder.ibm.com/infocenter/cldscp10/index.jsp?topic=/com.ibm.cloudscape.doc/sqlj151.htm - refer to this table for edits Reference Manual Version 10 SC18-9248-00 >> The right column sub items under 'Privilege tables' need to have 'no' >> placed in the right-hand column - e.g.: TABLE_PRIVILEGES SQL92T no COLUMNS_PRIVILEGES SQL92T no USAGE_PRIVILEGES SQL92T no >> Delete the extra 's' at end of left column sting: ' Compound character string constantss ' << extra 's' >> We implemented INTERSECT in v 10.1. Change right column value to 'yes' for left column value 'INTERSECT' (sub item of 'Table Operations') > Doc Review: Derby Developer's Guide > ----------------------------------- > > Key: DERBY-380 > URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-380 > Project: Derby > Type: Improvement > Components: Documentation > Environment: all > Reporter: Jeff Levitt > Priority: Minor > Fix For: 10.1.1.0 > > This issue tracks comments for the Derby Developer's Guide. The deadline for > posting comments isTuesday, June 28, noon Pacific time. > Some guidelines to follow when posting comments to this issue are: > - Try to make clear and concise comments about what you want changed whenever > possible. Provide concrete comments that say "Please change <original> to > <modified>" instead of generic comments like "This section needs to be > rewritten." > - If you're reviewing the HTML Files copy, include the URL for the page in > the review comment. Obtain the URL like this: > * highlight the topic in the left frame > * right click > * choose "Properties" > * copy and paste the address in the pop up box. > - If you're reviewing the PDF copy, in the review comment: > * Include the page number for the PDF, and indicate whether the number is > the PDF sheet number or the printed page number. > * Include the title of the section that the problem occurs in. If it's in > a subsection, try to include the hierarchy of titles. > - Please don't review the HTML Book copy -- it'll be time consuming to match > up that copy with the underlying DITA source. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://issues.apache.org/jira/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
