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Kathey Marsden commented on DERBY-381:
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GENERAL
Remove mydomain.com from all examples e.g
e.g. change "myserver.mydomain.com" to just "myserver"
PAGE 9
CHANGE
This part of the guide is divided into sections discussing the Network Server.
TO
is part of the guide is divided into sections discussing the Network Server and
other server frameworks.
page 13
Under Shutting down by using the API
REMOVE:
To do so, use the following syntax:
shutdown();
NEW TEXT
You can use the NetworkServerControl API to shut down the Network Server from
within a Java application.
For example ...
page 18,19
Examples 1,2, & 3 remove the trailing ;
Page 20
Universal Driver System information
The Derby Network Server is compatible with the DB2 JDBC Universal Driver
release 1.2 and higher.
Should read version 2.4 and higher
page 32
The url for the servlet should be:
http://<server>[:port]/derby/derbynet
> Doc review: Derby Server and Admin Guide
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>
> Key: DERBY-381
> URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-381
> Project: Derby
> Type: Improvement
> Components: Documentation
> Environment: all
> Reporter: Jeff Levitt
> Priority: Minor
> Fix For: 10.1.1.0
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