Jean T. Anderson wrote:

> Our Derby report will be combined with the other Apache DB subprojects,
> so it needs to be short. How does what I have written down below sound?
> Anything to change/add?
> 
> thanks,
> 
>  -jean
> 
> ==============================
> 
> July - September
> 
> Three new Derby committers were added in July: David Van Couvering,
> Bernt Johnsen and Oyvind Bakksjo.  Derby graduated out of the Apache
> Incubator at the end of July to join the DB Project, and it made its
> first official release, 10.1.1.0, available on August 3. The developer
> and user communities are both thriving with 242 and 356 subscribers,
> respectively. Since the creation of the Derby wiki in September, there
> has been a substantial increase in proposal collaboration.
> 

I think the "substantial increase in proposal collaboration" might be a
little over the top. Maybe remove substantial?

Dan.

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