[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1207?page=all ]
Jean T. Anderson resolved DERBY-1207:
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Resolution: Fixed
Fix originally applied to just the trunk, now also merged to 10.1.
> Derby Server and Administration Guide - Network Server security
> ---------------------------------------------------------------
>
> Key: DERBY-1207
> URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1207
> Project: Derby
> Type: Bug
> Components: Documentation
> Versions: 10.1.2.3
> Environment: DITA-sourced documentation
> Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
> Assignee: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
> Priority: Minor
> Fix For: 10.1.2.3
> Attachments: cadminnetservsecurity.diff, cadminnetservsecurity.diff.html,
> cadminnetservsecurity.html
>
> In this page is written:
> 1) A server that is started with the 0.0.0.0 option will listen to client
> requests that originate from both localhost and from other machines on the
> network.
> -> 0.0.0.0 is the IP address, the option is -h, so in my opinion the sentence
> should be:
> A server that is started with the -h 0.0.0.0 option will listen to client
> requests that originate from both localhost and from other machines on the
> network.
> 2) In addition, administrative commands (for example,
> org.apache.derby.drda.NetworkServerControl shutdown) can run only on the host
> where the server was started, even if the server was started with the -h
> option.
> -> In this sentence it seems to me that "However" is better than "In
> addition", because what these sentence declares is an exception ("even if the
> server was started with the -h option") of what is declared in the previous
> sentence, and not a simple addition.
> 3) <p></p>
> -> There a two empty paragraphs in the source file that can be removed.
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