[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1398?page=all ]
Rick Hillegas updated DERBY-1398:
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Attachment: bug1398_miscDoc_01.diff
Attaching bug1398_miscDoc_01.diff, corrections to the miscellaneous
copy-editting issues listed here. Touches the following files:
M src\workingwithderby\cwwdsummary.dita
M src\adminguide\cadminov38650.dita
M src\adminguide\cadminappsclientdiffs.dita
M src\adminguide\tadminapps811302.dita
M src\adminguide\cadminapps811478.dita
M src\devguide\cdevspecial49460.dita
M src\devguide\tdevupgradesoft.dita
M src\devguide\cdevdvlp14839.dita
M src\devguide\cdevspecial13670.dita
M src\ref\crefmpref23947.dita
M src\ref\rrefjdbc96386.dita
M src\ref\crefjavbclobnot.dita
M src\getstart\cgsinstallingderby.dita
I've built the these changes into the html versions of the Working With Derby
Guide, Admin Guide, Developer's Guide, Reference Guide, and Getting Started
Guide. They look good.
> Miscellaneous copy-editting problems in the user guides
> -------------------------------------------------------
>
> Key: DERBY-1398
> URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1398
> Project: Derby
> Type: Bug
> Components: Documentation
> Versions: 10.2.0.0
> Reporter: Rick Hillegas
> Assignee: Rick Hillegas
> Fix For: 10.2.0.0
> Attachments: bug1398_miscDoc_01.diff
>
> We should clean up these copy-editting problems:
> Admin Guide
> Update Copyrights in all docs
> Part One...About this guide and the Network Server documentation
> "and and" -> "and"
> Part One...Accessing the Network Server by using the network client driver
> retrieveMessageText: Is this synchronization cruft:
> "...or when starting new units of work.
> Part One...XA and the Network Server
> We should say that the Derby Network Client is an example
> of a compliant DRDA client which you can use for distributed
> transactions.
> Part One...Using the Derby ij tool with the Network Server
> Do you really need the DRIVER command? Doesn't ij figure this
> out by itself?
> Part One...Differences between the embedded client and the network client
> driver
> These differences between network and embedded clients may need
> revisiting:
> * There are no localized error messages for the network client.
> * The network client driver fully materializes LOBS when retrieving a row.
> * To use an encrypted user id and password, you need to have the IBM's
> Java Cryptography Extension (JCE) Version 1.2.1 or later.
> Developer's Guide
> Upgrade
> Soft Upgrade
> Soft upgrade allows you TO ...
> Application development overview
> last sentence "to serve AS..."
> Derby server-side programming
> Programming trigger actions
> Examples of trigger actions
> insert space between "the" and "flight_history"
> Triggers and exceptions
> "before to the statement" -> "before the statement"
> Getting Started Guide
> Installing and working with Derby
> Installing Derby
> "This downloads page includes provides" ->
> "This downloads page provides"
> Reference Guide
> About this guide
> How this guide is organized
> "Information about Derby's implementation of the JDBC interface include"
> ->
> "Information about Derby's implementation of the JDBC interface,
> including"
> JDBC Reference
> java.sql.Blob and java.sql.Clob
> I don't know what the following phrase means: "SQL extension over SQL"
> Notes
> "on the same column so could result"
> ->
> "on the same column could result"
> Working With Derby Guide
> What next with Derby
> "as your next step in leaning about"
> ->
> "as your next step in learning about"
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