[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1194?page=comments#action_12422658 ] Kathey Marsden commented on DERBY-1194: ---------------------------------------
Halley, are you actively working on this issue? Do you still need more reviews of the patch after John's review? If not can we uncheck "Patch Available"? I have not looked at the patch itsself but have a comment on the Jira Summary for this issue. Since the Jira Summary is what prints in the release notes and is the primary search mechnism used by users to search for issues, it is good to have something quite specific so that users don't have to drill down into the description to find out what is fixed by the issue. For this issue, something like: "Clarify wording for ways to manage the Network Server in the Derby Server and Administration Guide" would be a more clear description of what is being fixed. > Derby Server and Administration Guide - Managing the Derby Network Server > ------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Key: DERBY-1194 > URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1194 > Project: Derby > Issue Type: Bug > Components: Documentation > Affects Versions: 10.1.2.3 > Environment: DITA files > Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira > Priority: Minor > Attachments: cadminconfig86869.diff, cadminconfig86869.diff.html, > cadminconfig86869.html, cadminconfig86869_a.diff, > cadminconfig86869_a.diff.html > > > In this manual is written: > Managing the Derby Network Server > The Derby Network Server can run as a stand-alone server, with Derby as an > embedded part of the application. > It can also be managed remotely from a web server by using a servlet > interface. You can manage the Network Server by using shell scripts, the > command line, or the Network Server API. See Managing the Derby Network > Server remotely by using the servlet interface for information about starting > and shutting down the Network Server using the servlet interface. > It seems to me that the sentences of this last paragraph are not in the > correct order, and the first and second sentences should be swapped, > becoming: > You can manage the Network Server by using shell scripts, the command line, > or the Network Server API. It can also be managed remotely from a web server > by using a servlet interface. See Managing the Derby Network Server remotely > by using the servlet interface for information about starting and shutting > down the Network Server using the servlet interface. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://issues.apache.org/jira/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
