[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1835?page=comments#action_12433512 ] Laura Stewart commented on DERBY-1835: --------------------------------------
Examples: #1 XCL41 "the delete rule of foreign key can not be CASCADE. (The relationship would cause another table to be delete-connected to the same table through multiple paths with different delete rules or with delete rule equal to SET NULL.)" - The first word "the" needs to be "The" - "can not" should be one word - The second sentence does not need the parenthesis #2 Message XJ215 should be updated to reflect that Clob/Blob are referring to method calls. The data types are not capitalized in Java. The message code needs to be changed not just the text. The message should be: XJ215 You cannot invoke other java.sql.Clob/java.sql.Blob methods after calling the free() method." > SQL State Messages need to be reviewed and improved for clarity and > completeness. > --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Key: DERBY-1835 > URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1835 > Project: Derby > Issue Type: Improvement > Components: Documentation > Affects Versions: 10.2.1.0 > Reporter: Laura Stewart > > The SQL State messages in the Reference Manual need to be reviewed and > cleaned up. > Some of the problems are: > - Unclear messages, object that the message refers to is not not clear > - Message too brief > - Capitalization of data types > - Capitalization of the sentence beginning word > - Missing punctuation -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://issues.apache.org/jira/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
