[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1839?page=comments#action_12436307 ] Mamta A. Satoor commented on DERBY-1839: ----------------------------------------
Laura, I just looked at the REVOKE statement page and it looks pretty good. There is one statement in there though, "You can revoke privileges from an object if you are the owner of the object, the database owner, or a user that has revoke privileges on the object.", which does not sound right to me. Other than database owner and the owner of the object, I don't think any other user can revoke privileges on a object. So this bit in the line ", or a user that has revoke privileges on the object" does not look correct to me. Another very minor comment. At the beginning of the same page, we have this line "Delete a specific table. " We should change it to "Delete data from a specific table. " Thanks, Laura. > Doc Review Updates - Ref Manual > ------------------------------- > > Key: DERBY-1839 > URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1839 > Project: Derby > Issue Type: Improvement > Components: Documentation > Affects Versions: 10.2.2.0 > Reporter: Laura Stewart > Assigned To: Laura Stewart > Attachments: 1839_SQLstatements.diff, derby1839_SQLstatements2.diff, > derby1839_SQLstatements2_html.zip, derby1839_SQLstatements_html.zip > > > This JIRA issue will be used to track all of the issues found in the 10.2 doc > review of the Reference Manual. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://issues.apache.org/jira/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
