Hi Kim -
Please do open an issue on WWD (Working With Derby) and correct these problems. Having the lines run together as shown in your comment on 10/12 is awful. Several people contributed to the document in the form of input and reviews, I did the original contribution and take no offense to any changes members of the community deem appropriate (this change is more 'badly needed' than 'deem appropriate'). Halley has already done some clean-up (see: Derby-1394). I 'winged' the formatting in the <codeblock> sections in hopes it would be easier to read the longer interactive examples but I'm not certain it made a big difference. And now, of course, it is broken.

I also noted Derby-1948 filed today (http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1948 ) caused by the changes in the DEMO directory structure - the PROGRAMS folder did not exist in early builds of 10.2 - references to $DERBY_HOME/demo/<subdir> need to be changed to $DERBY_HOME/demo/programs/<subdir>. While you have the files open could you correct this as well? I don't know when I could get around to making even such a small correction.

And; Thanks for the kind words about the document.

Kim Haase wrote:
Hi, Laura,

Thanks for this comment. I've been wondering about the tagging in the
Working with Derby book -- I think it is often unconventional (should
output be in italics?? I don't think so). There is a DITA - to - XSL-FO
problem, as you say, but possibly the formatting should be cleaned up
too. This would be a separate bug, though. I could file it (and fix it)
if you think it would be worth while.

I'm sending this offline as I don't know who contributed the WWD book --
it's good to have it and the content is very useful -- and I don't want
to hurt their feelings.

Kim

Laura Stewart (JIRA) wrote On 10/16/06 12:25,:
[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-408?page=comments#action_12442633 ] Laura Stewart commented on DERBY-408:
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I don't believe that the documentation should use tags like bold <b> to force line breaks. Infact, in most cases there shouldn't be bold tags inside of codeblocks and syntax. Typically uppercase letters are used for the required SQL and lowercase letters for the variables such as index-name. Sometimes <varname> is used for the variables, which displays the text in italic. This sounds like a DITA - to - XSL-FO problem.
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