Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
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Key: DERBY-2125
URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
Project: Derby
Issue Type: Improvement
Components: Documentation
Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
Environment: DITA sourced documentation
Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
Priority: Minor
Fix For: 10.0.2.2
In this page is written:
"Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html.
This downloads page provides several distributions of Derby, including
prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions. You will
also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to
access the Derby source code that is currently in development."
but I think the correct could be:
"Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html.
This downloads page provides links to several distributions of Derby, including
the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source
distributions. To find information on how to use the Subversion version control
system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the
development trunk, please see the page
http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html.";
Because:
1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby,
including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions",
it "provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest
official release and previous official releases binary and source
distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".
2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion
version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in
development." is not correct, there is a link to the source code, so I think
this sentence could be "To find information on how to use the Subversion
version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch
or the development trunk, please see the page
http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html.";
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