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Kim Haase updated DERBY-1972:
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    Attachment: DERBY-1972-4-dita.zip
                DERBY-1972-4.diff
                DERBY-1972-4.zip

My apologies. I realized one more problem. The client/server examples show 
output that has a Derby version (10.2.1.6) and tag hardcoded in them. (This 
means they are out of date for 10.2.2, but this is not worth fixing, I think.) 
These and other output examples also have a date from this past fall hardcoded 
in them, which is also obsolete and would be a nuisance to maintain. 

So I've replaced these with <varname> tags specifying version, tag, and date. 
This affects all the twwdactivity files except for twwdactivity1_Setup.dita. 
I'm attaching DERBY-1972-4.diff, DERBY-1972-4-dita.zip (without the .svn files 
that accidentally got in there last time), and DERBY-1972-4.zip. Let me know if 
this seems like a reasonable solution.

> Working With Derby needs some formatting fixes and other minor cleanup
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-1972
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1972
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>            Reporter: Kim Haase
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>            Priority: Minor
>         Attachments: DERBY-1747.diff, DERBY-1972-2-dita.zip, 
> DERBY-1972-2.diff, DERBY-1972-2.zip, DERBY-1972-3-dita.zip, 
> DERBY-1972-3.diff, DERBY-1972-3.zip, DERBY-1972-4-dita.zip, 
> DERBY-1972-4.diff, DERBY-1972-4.zip, DERBY-1972.zip, DERBY_1972.diff
>
>
> The Working With Derby book uses DITA tags in ways that are not always 
> consistent with the usage in other books and that lead to some problems in 
> the processed output. Some examples are the use of the <varname> tag in 
> inappropriate places and the use of formatting tags within <codeblock> tags.
> There are also a few minor punctuation and syntax issues worth fixing.

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