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Laura Stewart updated DERBY-425:
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    Attachment: lockwagraphics12152006.zip

Attaching a zip file that contains the updated graphics.
Waiting to hear back from derby-dev list about what to do with the 
CorelDraw (CDR) files before I create a patch.

> Developer's guide issues
> ------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-425
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-425
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Task
>          Components: Documentation
>         Environment: all
>            Reporter: Jeff Levitt
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: 10.2.3.0
>
>         Attachments: lockwagraphics12152006.zip
>
>
> Some general comments:
> 1. SQL tips starts at page 94 of the document, but table of content lists it 
> starting at page 93.
> 2. At each page of this document, you might want to add guide name and main 
> section name at the footer of the page so that it is easier to see which 
> guide and which section the page belongs to.  
> 3.  These are comments by Susan concerning some of the graphics in the 
> Developer's Guide.  To fix these, I think we need someone who knows something 
> about graphics and has the authoring tools available to do something like 
> this.
> Page: http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/devguide/cdevconcepts16400.html
> The color of the arrows and in one instance the length of the bars in these
> examples is incorrect.
> Figure 1:
> The arrow on the time line should be yellow, not orange.
> The arrow under the text 'Transactions are never aborted ...', should be 
> orange, and
> not yellow. So in effect, the colors of the arrows is exactly opposite to 
> what it
> should be.
> Figure 2:
> Again, the color of the arrows is exactly in reverse. The first arrow should 
> be
> yellow, the second arrow should be orange.
> Figure 3:
> The color of the arrows is incorrect, but the length of the bars are 
> incorrect.
> Since locksWaitTimeout is at 50 seconds, it should be smaller in length then 
> the
> deadlockTimeout bar, which is 60 seconds.
> So the picture should look something like this:
> |locksWaitTimeout= 50 |
>                                                           __
> | deadlockTimeout = 60 | \/ No deadlock ....
>                I've been waiting 50 seconds
>                Abort me (I'll try again later).
>                             __
>                             \/ (orange) 

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