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Laura Stewart commented on DERBY-2361:
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Hi Kim -

I was getting ready to commit this patch, and I noticed the this title:

        Network Server user authentication when user authentication is on in 
Derby

It just doesn't seem solid to me with the repeat of "user authentication" and 
"is on in".
I know that there is another topic about "off in Derby".

Maybe "Security mechanism options when user authentication is enabled on a 
Derby Network Server " and "Security mechanism options when user authentication 
is disabled on a Derby Network Server"

I was trying to pull the content from the actual text...  it's still too long 
for my tastes, but seems more accurate and less redundant (and easier to 
translate).

What do you think?

> Documentation should give examples for using the different security mechanisms
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>
>                 Key: DERBY-2361
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2361
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.2.0
>            Reporter: Andrew McIntyre
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>         Attachments: DERBY-2361-2.diff, DERBY-2361-2.zip, DERBY-2361-3.diff, 
> DERBY-2361.diff, DERBY-2361.zip, rrefattribsecmech.dita, 
> rrefattribsecmech.dita-2
>
>
> The Derby Server and Administration guide talks about the different security 
> mechanisms, but does not give examples of how these can be used via 
> connection URLs, it only mentions the client DataSource field names. 
> http://db.apache.org/derby/docs/10.2/adminguide/cadminapps49914.html
> The documentation should give examples of how to use the different security 
> mechanisms via connection URLs, and perhaps an example of how the client 
> field names would be used programmatically.

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