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A B commented on DERBY-1520:
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> All of your comments were addressed unless noted below: 

Wow, that was fast :)

This looks good.  I think you have addressed all of the major issues; just a 
few typos remain:

 -- There are a couple of places where I see "You can use the this"; i.e. the 
word "the" should be removed.

 -- Sometimes there are references to "diagnostic tables" and sometimes there 
are references to "diagnostics tables"--i.e. the difference is the trailing "s" 
on "diagnostic".  It would be good if this could be made consistent throughout 
the doc.

  -- I think the first example for SYSCS_DIAG.SPACE_TABLE should be changed 
from:

       FROM TABLE (SYSCS_DIAG.SPACE_TABLE(myspacetable)) 

to be 

      FROM TABLE (SYSCS_DIAG.SPACE_TABLE('MYTABLE')) 

so that it is more consistent with the second example.

I admit that I did this review rather quickly so I may have missed something, 
but aside from the above minor things I think this is looking good.  Thanks for 
your persistence!

> Document new SYSCS_DIAG tables
> ------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-1520
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1520
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Sub-task
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>            Reporter: Stan Bradbury
>         Assigned To: Laura Stewart
>         Attachments: derby1520_1.diff, derby1520_2.diff, derby1520_3.diff, 
> derby1520_4.diff, derby1520_5.diff, refderby.ditamap, 
> rrefsyscsdiagtables.html, rrefsyscsdiagtables.html, rrefsyscsdiagtables.html
>
>
> See comments for DERBY-571 for initial documentation discussion.  The new 
> tables (mapped to the old Diagnostic VTIs) are:
> The old style syntax will remain in place for 10.2, but become deprecated.
> The tables to be implemented in this change are:
> SYSCS_DIAG.LOCK_TABLE replaces org.apache.derby.diag.LockTable
> SYSCS_DIAG.STATEMENT_CACHE replaces org.apache.derby.diag.StatementCache
> SYSCS_DIAG.TRANSACTION_TABLE replaces org.apache.derby.diag.TransactionTable
> SYSCS_DIAG.ERROR_MESSAGES replaces org.apache.derby.diag.ErrorMessages 
> The information about the tables can be found in the javadoc for the class 
> listed above.
> That can be found at:
> http://db.apache.org/derby/javadoc/engine/
> click on the org.apache.derby.diag link in the Packages table, then select 
> each class, e.g. LockTable to see the info.

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