Hi Rick - A few comments below:

On 8/8/07, Rick Hillegas <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>
> Derby 10.3.1.4 introduces the following new behaviors:

*** (LS) Derby isn't human so "bahaviors" is not correct. Should be
"features" or "capabilities".

>  o Restricts shutdown, encryption, and upgrade powers to the DBA.
*** (LS) I think "powers" should be "authorization"

>  o Installs a default security manager for the network server.
*** (LS) I believe that the documentation initial caps Network Server.

>  o Creates tables based on a query shape.
*** (LS) I've never heard of a query "shape". We should try to use a
different word.  If you can explain to me what you mean, I can suggest
another word.

-- 
Laura Stewart

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