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Kim Haase commented on DERBY-2820:
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I believe both these topics have been worked on since this issue was filed,
though I'm not certain. It would be helpful to know what changes were thought
to be needed.
For tadminnetservbasic.dita, the basic policy file is a good deal longer than
is shown in this example; is that what was meant?
There are also some minor problems that may or may not be worth fixing:
tadminnetservbasic.dita:
Spell out "e.g.", "i/o", "etc."
No need to capitalize "Template" and "Basic" in last paragraph
Use productshortname defined in ../conrefs.dita instead of "Derby"
tadminnetservcustom.dita:
First paragraph: change "secion" to "section"
Spell out "i/o"
First bullet: missing word in "Copy the from this location" (should be
"template"?)
Use productshortname defined in ../conrefs.dita instead of "Derby"
> Improve documentation in Admin Guide regarding Network Server security policy
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> Key: DERBY-2820
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2820
> Project: Derby
> Issue Type: Bug
> Components: Documentation
> Reporter: Laura Stewart
> Priority: Minor
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> Edit the text in the following files.
> http://db.apache.org/derby/docs/dev/adminguide/tadminnetservbasic.html
> http://db.apache.org/derby/docs/dev/adminguide/tadminnetservcustom.html
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