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Kim Haase commented on DERBY-1194:
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I think you've done a great job disentangling all the various suggestions,
Bryan. I think I looked at them a long time ago and couldn't think *what* to do.
Also, pointing to those figures in the tutorial works really well.
You don't really need the "Or" in the bullet list, and you don't need
punctuation at the end -- it can just be
o As .... engine
o As .... application
> Clarify wording for ways to manage the Network Server in the Derby Server and
> Administration Guide
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>
> Key: DERBY-1194
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1194
> Project: Derby
> Issue Type: Bug
> Components: Documentation
> Affects Versions: 10.1.3.1
> Environment: DITA files
> Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
> Assignee: Bryan Pendleton
> Priority: Minor
> Attachments: cadminconfig86869.diff, cadminconfig86869.diff.html,
> cadminconfig86869.html, cadminconfig86869.html, cadminconfig86869_a.diff,
> cadminconfig86869_a.diff.html, docs.diff
>
>
> In this manual is written:
> Managing the Derby Network Server
> The Derby Network Server can run as a stand-alone server, with Derby as an
> embedded part of the application.
> It can also be managed remotely from a web server by using a servlet
> interface. You can manage the Network Server by using shell scripts, the
> command line, or the Network Server API. See Managing the Derby Network
> Server remotely by using the servlet interface for information about starting
> and shutting down the Network Server using the servlet interface.
> It seems to me that the sentences of this last paragraph are not in the
> correct order, and the first and second sentences should be swapped,
> becoming:
> You can manage the Network Server by using shell scripts, the command line,
> or the Network Server API. It can also be managed remotely from a web server
> by using a servlet interface. See Managing the Derby Network Server remotely
> by using the servlet interface for information about starting and shutting
> down the Network Server using the servlet interface.
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